This is just a small portion of my book, I figured I'd share some of it. The main character is a robot with a human brain. This takes place many years after a catastrophic event on earth. Let me know what you think (does it create any emotion, or is it all meaningless sensor writing? Is it too wordy? etc).
The grass and trees changed to a deep shade of blue under the night sky. The sky was brighter than the surface of the planet, and without night vision I couldn’t differentiate
Updated 02-26-2010 at 06:24 AM by DJArendee